Wednesday, 10 March 2010

Ravenous Wedneday with Isabel Roman

(Please imagine the following as narrated by the ubiquitous movie trailer voiceover dude and accompanied by the equally ubiquitous KACHUNK sound during the pauses):


In a world where attention spans are short ... where publishers are folding or being tucked into little pockets of huge corporations (damn you, Rupert Murdoch!) ... where it's increasingly hard to gain a readership ... a brave author named Isabel Roman steps forward to try and figure out how writers can gain their readers' attention quickly ... without letting it escape! So sit back ... have a drink ... and enjoy this post while you still have the chance...



Capturing the imagination by Isabel Roman


Nowadays, getting someone’s attention much less capturing their imagination has become impossible. Readers, movie goers, tv watchers, have become jaded! Not the least of which is me. The moment you hear a cliché or see a car explode or two lovers are fighting, you can almost see exactly where it’s going and exactly what’s going to happen.


For the author, it’s tenfold more difficult to really grab or ‘hook’ the reader into your story and capture their imagination with our characters. We need to become more creative, continually upping the ante. Sometimes, favorite authors can get away with a slow beginning, thereby allowing them time to develop their verse and characters.

Those of us new to the market don’t have that luxury. We have to entice in the first paragraph, oftentimes in the first sentence. I once (long, long ago) heard an author, who I tentatively claim as Phyllis Whitney, say she had nightmares that an editor would only read the first 3 sentences of her novel. She had to tempt him/her to read further, building on those first 3 exceptional sentences.


It’s stuck with me through the years and now begs the question—how do we accomplish this???


There are many ways various authors, myself included, use to capture the reader: everything from extremely controversial to blatant sex, to a mystery question that begs to be answered. It isn’t easy to put one or sometimes all of those elements into 3 lousy sentences. But sometimes just the hint of one of these elements is often enough. After all, we wish the reader to keep reading. Can’t answer all the questions in the first paragraph!


While many of us would like to start the story with extensive back-story or prologue, or beautiful imagery in regards to location or situation, the best thing to do is to start as close to the action of the story as possible.


With media constantly bombarding consumers, we writers often have less than 10 seconds to draw someone into your tale. Use those seconds wisely. A shocking line, an incredible action moment, or a puzzling query in front of them, and you can draw them into your story.


Now how to keep them? How to secure your reader’s interest?


By having a great story that works. Generational stories like John Jakes aside, most romances take place in a set time and locale. I don’t mean historical vs. contemporary, I mean a set amount of time. My best advice is to keep the story tight. Keep the highs and lows consistent throughout, and end with a bang.


How about you all? How do you get -- and keep -- your readers' interest? And readers, what is it about a book that will capture -- and keep (kachunk!) you reading and buying their books? Let's weigh in!


Isabel Roman writes erotic romances with a paranormal twist. She has been writing for four years, and loves just about every second of it! Historical paranormals caught her eye (and ear) when she realized the vast conflicts inherent in historicals, and her deep and abiding love for all things paranormal. Nurturing a love of all time periods, she plans to explore as many as she can with as many couples as she can. Isabel is the author of Ravenous Romance's The Dark Desires of the Druids series, which features a Ravenous Rendezvous, The Tryst, as well as a full-length novel, Murder & Magick.Visit her website for more info and to read some kick-ass reviews of her books!

70 comments:

Dana Fredsti said...

First, first, first!

Hi, Isabel! G&T?

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Hagelrat said...

Love this article! Thanks Isabel, really good thoughts.
I'll take a creamy cocktail please Dana. :)

Isabel Roman said...

I'd love a G&T, Dana, thanks! I'm currently reading the book The Last Legion (which the so much better movie with Colin Firth *yum* was based on) and realized that the ONLY reason I'm still reading is because I want to see how the movie differs. If it weren't for that, I wouldn't have made it past page 10.

So in a sense, yeah-it has my attention. But otherwise, not so much.

Hagelrat said...

Things that get my attention, a character I want to follow, a part of the world building I find interesting, and incident I want to see play out. Amongst others.

Tea and Tomes said...

Very interesting article.

When I was younger, I used to tell myself that I wanted to write just like my favourite author, who was Mercedes Lackey at the time. It wasn't until I started seriously looking at what it would take to get published that I realized that her formula would absolutely not work for a first-timer these days. I can't take pages and chapters to introduce and expand on characters, I can't wait until half the book has passed for the plot to really get started, because unless I somehow develop a loyal fanbase before I get published, nobody's going to sit around and read that. It's one thing to read such books by authors you know and love, but it's another to start off that way. More often than not, the reader will get bored at the lack of direction and action and put the book down before the good parts start.

I admit, though, that it doesn't entirely seem fair to me that prospective authors now have to catch agent and publisher attention so quickly and so strongly. I see little wrong with spending the first chapter doing some buildup and character introduction, and then having it set up so that at the end of the chapter, the reader wants to turn the page and read on. Why start with the action if the action isn't where one needs to start?

It's a fine line to walk. I envy the people who do it and do it well.

K. A. Laity said...

I do think it's best to jump right into scene, but sometimes a little scene setting is necessary. Bending the rules without breaking them -- that's the trick. You can offer some exposition if you disguise it well.

I think I need a a Bombardier to go with the Motörhead and grading. Yeah, it's early -- so what?

Hagelrat said...

Tea - i think it must be very hard ot be an author now.
Kate - motorhead is soo going to be our pub crawl soundtrack and maybe some twisted sister.

Jack C. Young said...

Jump right into the story and take off from there. Hemingway (and Heinlein) had the right idea here. Throw your reader into the action and let us follow you along. Dana does this (and very well too in RtB and MFH: The Peruvian Pigeon.)
The best SF writers always did this and succeeded wonderfully.
Hi, Dana! Back with a bang, I see. I think I'll have a G&T this morning to get the blood flowing.
It's going to be a great day here at Unbound. LOL.

Lana Griffin said...

Great post, Isabel! Just reading about all of our author troubles makes me NEED a bottle of gin! Dana Dana, forget the glass, just shove the bottle down the bar!

The old genre rule is to start as if racing from the side of the pool -- spring into the action. Grab the reader by the throat.

Talented authors can often get away with slowing down pace to a crawl. I'm clearly not one of those authors - ha! - I need the backbone of plot.

Reading is such a subjective matter - what one reader loves, another hates. Editors might love your first 3 sentences (or your entire ms) but reject a partial for entirely different reasons, typically based on MONEY (ie, how much they can make off of you).

Dana Fredsti said...

Woot! Good morning/afternoon, everyone! (Dispenses drinks, including Lana's bottle of gin, VERY quickly!).

To me, whether or not something catches my attention as a reader isn't always a 'hook,' per se, but how well the first page is written. A funny line of dialogue. A good description. No action is necessarily necessary. On the other hand, there are authors who used to be edited quite firmly and are now given free reign and LORD, do they need editing. They lose my interest VERY quickly...

Dana Fredsti said...

Oh, for you, Adele, one Royal Pineapple! Served in the pineapple, of course!

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Dana Fredsti said...

Hey, gang, don't forget to also stop by and visit Courtney Sheets (another of my fave RR authors) as she guest posts at Naughty Gin Swilling Lana's blog today! http://www.lanagriffin.blogspot.com!

K. A. Laity said...

Hey, Adele -- can we start the pub crawl now?

Dana Fredsti said...

Ooh, a moving blog party! I like it! Except... I need good wine and most pubs aren't known for their wine... Guess I'll bring my own bottle.

Kate, are you and Margery still in the U.K.?

cmkempe said...

Grabbing a reader's attention is a challenge. In cinematic terms, I like to think of the start of a story as a kind of close up. Gradually the camera pulls back to make the situation and location clear, but at first we need to connect to the character(s) in an exciting way as someone tries to kill them/kiss them/rob them/argue with them as the case may be.

Heya, vodka martini for me: very dry, olives on the side -- a big plate o' them, please. This is my lunch.

K. A. Laity said...

Sadly, no -- we're in NY. Hence the drinking.

Dana Fredsti said...

Ah! In that case, here is one huge dry vodka martini with oodles of extra olives!

cmkempe said...

Dana, I suggest the Bunch o' Grapes in Knightsbridge. Perfect for a pub crawl because it also has an extensive wine selection.

I would say more but it's a teaching day and a meeting day and I have to be prepared. Not yet so -- more martini!

[my word verification! 'nohump' (sadly accurate at the moment)]

Dana Fredsti said...

Margery... I'm so sorry... but... LOL!! Nohump... heeeeeee.....

And I'm totally up to try Bunch o' Grapes. Field trip to England!

Hagelrat said...

We need to persuade RR to send a bunch of you over to tour the UK together. Then I can come and hang out and be a groupie.

Dana Fredsti said...

WOot! WE have a groupie, gang! We'll need to make you a T-shirt, Adele...

Lana Griffin said...

RR tour? UK, absolutely, but don't forget Hawaii!

We'll pick up Hagelrat in UK, party on down at Kate's pubs, and continue on to the beaches.

Hagelrat said...

hmm a Ravenous Groupie t shirt, with bloody fangs? Yes please.

Lana Griffin said...

I like the idea of the group t-shirt with bloody fangs. May I suggest matching bikinis? I can see it now:

Triangle top in black. One bloody fang on the left triangle, one on the right.

Hagelrat said...

Lana, with my figure I will have to insist on a swimsuit. ;)

Dana Fredsti said...

U.K., Hawaii... anyplace else we wanna add?

T-shirts and bathing suits/bikinis for EVERYone!

Lana Griffin said...

Moonlight, a dark beach... all you need is a bloody fang bathing suit, and they come in all styles: monokini, trikini, quadrokini, and of course, the ever popular black one-piece with glowing eyeballs on each cup.

Lana Griffin said...

We may need an extensive research trip.

How can we start our novels with action if we never get any action ourselves?

{ Lana, strapping on those black boots again and grabbing her blonde wig off the bookshelf }

Dana Fredsti said...

We need to design this bathing suit, Lana! and yeah, getting some action would be loverly too...

Hagelrat said...

and the t shirt. :)

Isabel Roman said...

Ooh, I want a t-shirt! Sorry, ladies, had hair done then off to BFF's to help with her kiddies then work (and then a meeting on Employee Advisory Services). Long day already!

So, t-shirt and field trip...works for me! As long as my G&T's are included in the pub crawl, I'm good.

As for hooks/beginnings, I agree. I think that a long buildup is fine, as long as its relevant to the story. Having grown up on Kathleen Woodiwiss, it's what I was used to. When I started seriously writing, I realized just how different things were and had to change my outlook.

Dana Fredsti said...

There's our gal! G&T fresh up for you, Isabel!

I grew up on Woodiwiss, Elizabeth Peters, Barbara Michaels, Mary Stewart, Georgette Heyer, and Rosemary Rogers... definitely used to a slower pace! I do enjoy a fast-paced read, but not when it's so fact the characters are short-changed...

Isabel Roman said...

I enjoy a fast paced novel, but noticed that many of the other genres I read like thrillers and mysteries do short change character developemnt unless it's a series then pieces are discovered over the course of say 5-7 books.

I don't necessarily mind that, but find it difficult to get involved with the characters in that first book, if I happen to read them in order, that is.

Dana Fredsti said...

I find the best series writers manage to give you enough in the first one to keep you coming back for more, yet don't give anything away in the subsequent books to spoil things if you're reading out of order. It's got to be an art!

Isabel Roman said...

An art, you're so right, Dana. Hard line to follow but I agree. If I come into a series in book 3 (which I've done) I want to be able to understand everything while still read something new and exciting.

Dana Fredsti said...

I'm working on the second in my mystery series (sort of squished in between my latest book for Lori & Holly) and am trying to figure out how to refer to what happened in book one without giving away the villain. It's tricky!

Jack C. Young said...

Pub crawling today? Beach walks? Sounds like lots of fun. At least there are no sharks in the UK... well, of the regular variety that is... ;-)

Dana Fredsti said...

See what happens when you leave the room for a few hours, Jack?

Jack C. Young said...

Sure do. But I returned in time for the real fun. Well it's your tour; you lay out the itinerary.
And thanks for having me along.

Dana Fredsti said...

We are ALWAYS happy to have you along, Jack! Hey, if you have a minute, go check out Courtney's post on Lana's blog! They'd love to see you there too!

Courtney Sheets said...

Great post, Isabel! I agree about jumping right into a scene. I like to start with action...must be all the film studies I took in college.

And yes we need groupie t-shirts for the Hawaii trip!!

K. A. Laity said...

All right, done teaching and done with meetings and now I REALLY need a martini. What a day -- need to do some writing, but I have to drag myself away from campus first.

I haven't read too many series, I don't think. Off the top of my head, I read all the Mary Poppins books when I was a kid. I love Storm Constantine's Wraetthu books and her Grigori trilogy. I never read romances when I was younger. I read Austen and gothics. Oh, not a series I suppose, but I do love Charles de Lint's books, many of which have continuing narratives and characters. I know I've probably read some series that I'm just not thinking of right now -- brain refresher needed. TEA!

Hee: word verification 'dremere' I am a dreamer all right. Hey, on the plus side, I've already written my column and I'm not going out until 10 so I can come back.

Dana Fredsti said...

Kate, I LOVE Charles de Lint. I do get a bit weary of the preachier 'message' books adn stories, but overall he's one of my favorite writers. Barbara Hambly too!

Here's another martini for you...

Hagelrat said...

I enjoy a good mix, g&t rum& coke, white wine spritzer. Heehee
No I love a faced paced thrown in at the deep end action, but I a like a gentle amble too. The think is, if you aren't going to sucker punch me in the first few pages, then you have to make me care about someone. If you provide me with neither of those things then the writing is going to have to be beyond spectacular to keep me reading.
I regularly give up on books because they ramble on an dI haven't connected.
Hmm, nearly bed time so hot chocolate and baileys for me please.
And the T-shirt so far, says "Ravenous" and shows bloody fangs? maybe set in some luscious lips?
And the bikini too obv. ;)
UK, Hawaii, I think we should wrap it up in the Maldives.

Dana Fredsti said...

Hot melted BELGIAN chocolate and Baileys!

I have no objection to the Maldives, unless they're due for either an earthquake or a tsunami.

Adele, have you read any of the Harry Dresden books by Jim Butcher? My latest favorite series...

David Fitzgerald said...

I'm so in favor of a RR author's field trip to the UK - or Hawaii - or San Francisco...
-Dave/Kilt

Hagelrat said...

Kilt - I assume Inara is in favour of testing you out on the beaches? ;p

cmkempe said...

I want to include India and New Zealand on the tour -- and hey, Egypt, too. Just sayin'

Time to walk home -- and log on to the computer there, LOL. I feel like Paul's grandad (very clean though).

Hagelrat said...

Dana - I LOVE Dresden and have them all, including some of the graphic novels. Have you tried Mike Carey? His Fix Castor is like a british Dresden so a different flavour to the series but fantastic.

Jack C. Young said...

Sadly, there are more than enough authors who forget the saying: "If you want to send a message, use Western Union."
Your characters should convey any point through their actions and responses to situations. Preaching was fine and dandy for the victorians but we've come quite a ways since then. If the story won't carry the reader along then nothing will.

Jack C. Young said...

India, New Zealand and Egypt? Are we going to teleport? I'm all up for that!!!
The homes of Brahma, Gautama, Middle Earth annnnnnnd Ramses, Pta Hotep, Akhenaten and, maybe, Moses too! Way cool.

Dana Fredsti said...

I'll go for New Zealand on this tour, but not so sure about the hat of India and Egypt for my dainty constitution!

Adele, I haven't read those...must give them a try!

Jack C. Young said...

I'm sure that will give us all new zeal and energy. ;-)
Egypt IS a bit dry and there are probably too many flies in India. A tour of Middle Earth...YAY!!!

K. A. Laity said...

I'm heading for Bubastis!

As long as we're sneaking in adverts, paranormal romance author Susan Hanniford Crowley is talking about Heroines over at my blog. Feel free to drop by and leave a comment.

It's Women's History Month and I'm getting guests to post: women who have something to say and people who have something to say about women in history. In fact, our lovely host Adele will be posting on Friday :-)

Isabel Roman said...

Research tour! As long as we have booze. :) I must renew my passport for all this but then I'll have a shiny new one for all those wonderful stops. But um, I'd love to go to India but only for about a 2-day tour.

Jack C. Young said...

Looking forward to Adele's post. You've given me another place to visit, Kate. Thanks. Enjoyed the Wombat today. You rock as well.

cmkempe said...

Oh, India requires at least a month. I envision this as a six month tour minimum. Shiny passport! I treasure the beaten roughness of mine and all the stamps and stickers. I inherited itchy feet from my Finnish-American grandfather.

K. A. Laity said...

Hey, Jack -- thanks for stopping by! Much appreciated. And on Susan's behalf, too.

So can I tempt folks to add Iceland to the tour? It's a fascinating place -- you can bathe in hot springs, go from a volcano to a glacier in no time at all. And the history! Everybody's an artist -- it's just part of the culture. I love it there.

Jack C. Young said...

Wouldn't mind visiting Snaeffels Yocul. Just for the Vernian atmosphere. How about having fun with a search for Ilmarinen's smithy. (All legends have some basis in fact after all. This kind of "scavenger hunt' could be fun.

Isabel Roman said...

I'm in for Iceland! I loved it there when I visited oh, 10 years ago. But it was in winter and the Thin...Then...the big crack in the land, oh what is it called? But it was the coolest thing but an avalanche blocked the road. Drat must now look it up.

Thingvellir! there I feel better.

And the Gullfoss Waterfalls are absolutely beautiful! I can't compliment them enough.

Isabel Roman said...

But back to the topic at hand...drawing people in. Though an argument could be made that using an unusual setting would do that.

Jack C. Young said...

Local can be a big drawing point. So can historical times. Ask Ellis Peters or Stephan Saylor.

Lisa Lane said...

Excellent post, Isabel! It's so true that finding that introductory "teaser" or "catch" can be difficult, especially nowadays, when many people expect fast pace and unique twists to old ideas. I guess that's why starting a new story is always the hardest part (at least it is for me).

In my erotica, I like to start with hot, passionate sex--but also find a way to make it out of the ordinary. In my sci-fi and horror, I like to start in seemingly one direction, and then throw off the pace with some kind of 180 or unexpected blow. It tells readers, "Don't think you can predict where this story is going to go at any given point; this book is going to take you on a wild ride."

*waves* Hello, all! I would like one of those shirts and bikini sets, please. ;-)

cmkempe said...

An unusual setting can be a good hook (and I immediately think of Blue Lagoon in Iceland! Hmmm, that could work...) especially if it's part of the action -- your heroine riding on a camel, dodging bullets from a man in a 1930s roadster. Now there's an interesting start!

Jack C. Young said...

I could get into that scenario, Margery. Why don't you write it?

cmkempe said...

Shhh -- writing now, Jack.

Dana Fredsti said...

Toss in Norway and the maelstrom and I'm there too!

Thanks, everyone, for making today such a lively Ravenous Wednesday!

Hagelrat said...

OK so it's a world Tour, I want to do Italy and Sweden. We need a big tour bus and you better add facilities for cats because I don't think either Dana or I would ever get their love back if we were gone 6 months without them. ;)

Jack & Kate am very nervous now about Friday. But Excited too.